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Wait!
Don't go!
Do you know?
Every day,
By waking you make
an impact? In your eyes
there is always a fire
in ev'ry movement there is life.
So when you can't reach what you desire
don't let that fire drown in your own tears
Just breathe, Oxygen fuels a fire, time helps it
grow, thrive, trust the strength given to you by nature.

Pain
is the
Universal
truth shared by all.
Nature's divine plan,
regeneration, life
from ashes, beauty from scars.
Sun and moon rise and fall, showing
ever-changing feelings are normal.
Predator and prey showing death gives life.
Life should always carry a balance, you must
always look to the smile don't look to the frown.
©2005-2009 *Daiichi
:icondaiichi:

Author's Comments

I have friends, as well as myself, who constantly worry about how important they are and how normal they are..how beautiful they are..so many other things..that people end up losing their joy and spirit for life in general..I hope you like it.

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:iconangel-fire-69:
*hugs you* such inspiration...*sighs* thank you:) i love this...perhaps one of your best pyramid

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some people like to sit back and observe life..to them, i give the camera....at least get some good footage!
:iconamayakouryuu:
Oh wow! I REALLY :love: this! It applies to anyone who has a lack of self-esteem, or whatever else, and it really gives them hope. Must fave!

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"Knowing others is intelligence; knowing yourself is true wisdom. Mastering others is strength. Mastering yourself is true power." ~ Lao Tzu
:iconraemae:
Wow hon. I really like this, the first verse especially.

So when you can't reach what you desire
don't let that fire drown in your own tears
Just breathe, Oxygen fuels a fire, time helps it
grow, thrive, trust the strength given to you by nature.

This is such good word usage. As the first commenter said, such inspiration. ^_^ *huggles*

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Do not complain about thorns among roses. Be grateful for roses among thorns. :rose:

:devilish: CONDEMN ME FATHER, FOR I HAVE SINNED. :devilish:
:icondaiichi:
I had to stop writing this in the middle of lines like that, and I was worried I would fizzle out..I feel happy that I could come up with such a poem..Thank you so much for your wonderful comlement and encouragement! :hug:

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False hopes are only false, if you haven't taken a second to measure a task, if you have, and you can still have faith in yourself to do a good job, then there's no reason you shouldn't be confident
:icondaiichi:
Thanks sooooo sooo much Amaya..Writing your gift really helped me find a rhythm and a new use for the basic pyramid structure. So I think I'll try to keep my mind open in the future for new ways to express my feelings through poetry :bouncy: Thank you so much :w00t:!

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False hopes are only false, if you haven't taken a second to measure a task, if you have, and you can still have faith in yourself to do a good job, then there's no reason you shouldn't be confident
:iconamayakouryuu:
You are so VERY VERY welcome :glomp: I'm so glad that you were inspired by working on my request!! :boogie: That's way kool! lol I'm a geek I know :P

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"Knowing others is intelligence; knowing yourself is true wisdom. Mastering others is strength. Mastering yourself is true power." ~ Lao Tzu
:iconraemae:
Anytime, anytime. It's a joy to read your words. ^_^

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Do not complain about thorns among roses. Be grateful for roses among thorns. :rose:

:devilish: CONDEMN ME FATHER, FOR I HAVE SINNED. :devilish:
:iconhightilidie:
Collin, this is so beautifully written. It has brought tears to my eyes. God def gave you the gift of expression through the written word. :+fav:

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:frail:Life is the greatest teacher, unfortunately it kills all its pupils:frail:
~hightilidie-stock
:iconraeofsonshine:
:wow: :cries: :clap::clap::clap: vonderful writing!!!
i'm at a loss for words here ....

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~Confucious say...
"A man that has money to burn ,
makes an ash of himself."

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