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I had to spend a couple nights--without you,
counting ev'ry second you were gone.
Got to thinkin' bout all the things i liked--about you,
And I found myself singing you a song.

Well it's all I've got to make me smile
while you're--gone away
If I could see you now for just a while
I think that I would say:

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You're a little piece of Heaven
To my heart. You're that lucky number
seven, you're the perfect work of art.
And to think that you could love me,
well it nearly makes me cry. And
though I know I can't speak for you,
I'm sure you would agree, I truly
do adore you--you're heavenly to me.

I meant to write a couple words--about you,
but I never knew I had so much to say.
If there's anyone who has a cause--to doubt you
I think that I could turn those doubts away.

Well it's all that I can do for you
while you're--here with me,
To love, and hug, and compliment you
You know just what I'd say?

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©2008-2009 *Daiichi
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Hey guys, here's a song I wrote based on feelings I have for a friend I have. It's a love song with Country tune in mind..but nonetheless, I'm proud of it..

Enjoy!
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Beautifully written as always... Glad to see you add things on DA again... nice work friend

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Aww! Collin posted! I must follow his example.........maybe tomorrow! XD


This is really sweet! Whoever you wrote it for is lucky! I hope it brightens their day! :)

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Your songs are just to DIE for! If you have any that i've missed, please feel free to send them to me in a note!!! ^_~:heart:

BILLY RAE CYRUS TIS NO COMPARISON!!!...although i only know two of his songs...STILL!!!

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You watch me? I watch you! If not, REMIND THE POOR GIRL.
Beautiful. You sum it up so well, and make it rhyme.
I wish I had any lyrical skill.

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Hey long time no see!!
It is so sweet!
I like this line the most!---> Got to thinkin' bout all the things i liked--about you,
And I found myself singing you a song.

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Aww, this is beautiful Collin. I love the songs you write. :D

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Thanks a ton Becky!! Hope you and Tia are well!

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I hope it does too!! I'm pumped to see you today!

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